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NAME: Gabriel Sheppard
AGE: 18
GENDER: Male
SEXUALITY: Straight
Weight: 220
Height: 6'5


GENERAL APPEARANCE: He has dirty blonde hair, He also has light blue eyes. He has very light skin color. He wears the traditional Konoha outfit. He Keeps his weapons all around his body for easy access. His face has only one scar which is on his forehead which is covered by his head band. His hair is spiked up but nothing fancy the kind of hair that is just like he ran his hand through and it stuck up. He does keep a jacket that is all black and rain resistant the jacket does have a symbol on the black which cover the whole back of the jacket. The symbol on the back of the jacket is the symbol of a white tiger.

VILLAGE: Konohagakure No Sato
RANK: Jounin
ELEMENTS: Wind/Fire
SPECIALTIES: Major:Ninjutsus Minor: Medical Jutsus
SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS: Moves at extreme speeds. Uses fire and wind as a combo


Clan
Clan Information [OPTIONAL]
Clan Name: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai Name: Sharingan

Kekkei Genkai Ability & Description: Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though, as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow them to harness their full potential.

The Uchiha clan member is not granted the Sharingan at birth; it is only activated later in life, typically during a time of emotional stress in the heat of battle. The Sharingan itself can be transferred to another non-Uchiha by a medical ninja, such as happened with Leaf ninja Uchiha Obito to his teammate Hatake Kakashi. Because his body was not born to carry the Sharingan, the eye is always activated and it burns Kakashi's chakra when used. To lessen the impact of the Sharingan on Kakashi's body, he normally keeps the eye hidden and out of use. Also of note, is the fact Kakashi, a non-Uchiha, was able to advance the Sharingan from two tomoe to three tomoe after gaining the eye.

The Sharingan itself contains three tomoe (comma). A higher mastery of the Sharingan can be seen in the creation of a new tomoe in the eye, with three tomoe being the typical highest form of the eye. The rare Mangekyou form is a unique evolution of the Sharingan beyond the three tomoe form, please see its entry for more information. An eye possessing two tomoe can allow the Uchiha clan member to track the movement of an opponent and do some minor copying of an opponents attack. For avoiding incoming attacks, the Uchiha's speed and agility will greatly control whether they can move to avoid it. However, three tomoe will greatly help in this area.

Two tomoe will also allow the ninja to pierce Genjutsu and see the surrounding reality for what it really is. It can also allow the member to pierce another’s body and see their chakra. While the eye is not refined enough to see the tenketsu and chakra circulatory system like the Byakugan, it can view the movement and flow of chakra. This can help them tell if a person is trapped in a Genjutsu, or if an attacker is a real threat or merely a bunshin.

An eye containing three tomoe will allow the ninja to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body. This prevents wasteful movement and allows the Uchiha clan member to conserve much needed chakra in battle. It allows them to synchronize their movement to strike at an area moments before their opponent is even in that spot, essentially allowing them to strike out and hit their opponent before they're even there.

Three tomoe also grants the Uchiha the ability to do Genjutsu and hypnosis after locking eyes with an enemy. This can be used to cause their opponent to do an attack of the Uchiha's choosing. This hypnosis can also be used as a Genjutsu counter, which is the ability to turn a Genjutsu spell back upon the original caster without the requirement of forming any handseals.

Clan History: The Uchiha clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be descended from the Hyuuga clan who possess the bloodline of the Byakugan eye. Because their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled at being able to read and fend off attackers. This made them prime candidates to help found the Konoha Military Police Corps. The organization itself would go on to incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol into their official logo.

Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are unique to another bloodline. It also gives one the ability to cast jutsu techniques only possible by possessing the eye.

The clan itself is known for their ties to fire. For a clan ninja to be seen as an adult, they must be able to utilize a Katon (Fire Element) jutsu such as Goukakyuu no Jutsu. Thus is the tie between the manipulation of fire and the mind of an Uchiha member. Most of the Uchiha were wiped out by one of their own members, known as Itachi. all were thought to have been killed except himself, and his younger borther, whom he had spared, but Uchihas are slowly rising up, showing that some of them were lucky enough to have not been murdered.


LIKES: Gabriel loves to train eat food thats big deal to him but he has to make it up with running and other stuff like that. He also like strong head who can think for themselves. He loves to fight which sometime is can end up bad. He like to teach young genin and other people how to do things. He enjoys being around people, and playing mind games and other sports. He loves challenges to.
DISLIKES: He hates ignorant cocky people they make him want to beat them into a 6 feet whole. He hates veggies they make him sick he does eat some. He hates women who have men do everything for them. He hates the Aka. because of when they attacked his village. He doesnt like people who act like know it alls.
WEAKNESSES: He is easily pushed which can make him angry and he will make mistakes. He never goes all out against women. He never retreats which cause problems. But the only way he will retreat is if his squad is in danger. He can use fire and wind as a combo which makes the fire go crazy.
STRENGTHS: [list them, min of three.] He has lightning fast speed. He is able to make quick attacks. He is seems to have a ability to all way be ahead of his opponent
FEARS: Because of his the attack on his village he never wants to lose people in his squad. Which is his only fear because if that happened he would never live it down which is his only and biggest fear.

PERSONALITY: He seems to all ways be very clam he does get pissed and when he does its not good he will try to beat the shit out of you if you annoy him to much but it takes allot to do that to him. When he is talking to other people he is very blunt. He is a great leader which gather people to him. He has a aura that makes people want to show him respect which allows him in battle to get the best out of his fellow Shinobi. But when fighting alone he will always seem to be one step ahead of his opponent he likes to be around trees do to the endless traps he likes to set. But if his emotions are in control of him he charges froward and doesn't think about what he will do he just want to kill you.
FAMILY: No syblings his parents might be dead. All other family has disappeared. Due to the attack on his village it was a small village behind a water fall. The Aka. attacked the attacked was repealed but major loss and many ran away.

JUTSU:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.



Weapons
Keeps All the normal weapons a shinobi has.

RP SAMPLE:
RP Sample
MEGabriel walked into the arena he looked at all the people in the stadium there were 100 of thousand of them he thought to himself that it would be weird to fight in front of that many people. He then remembered he had forgot to bring his gear except for ninja wire but he was clam because most of the time he fought he had no gear except his sword so it was ok to him. He then noticed that his opponent was a little over 5'0 tall while he was standing at 6'0 tall which he then knew he had to win he would embarrass himself if he lost to him. The Proctor then announced there names. The crowd went wild when they had announced his opponent's name when his name was announced it was almost silent he didn't care because he knew that he could easily beat his opponent. After the crowd calmed the Proctor asked if both ninja were ready . Gabriel quickly said yes as so did his opponent. The Proctor said begin the battle had begin with the audience in complete silence.
Opponent Sazuno looked around.The arena was crowding with people, after all, the Chuunin exams, are one of the most important events in the world after all.He knew he had to win this match, or atleast lose, but prove his intelligence, leadership and as such.The proctor asked Sazuno if he was ready.He calmly started thinking on the battle for himself.It was something big, important, and he was wanting to prove himself for some time now.He looked around and then looked at the Proctor, replying to his quesstion with a nod, he saw his oponent saying yes as well.He didn't knew this kid, he never talked to him, so, he didn't knew what were his strenghts, or any of that kind.Sazuno made a couple handseals, expelling some words after."Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!"And after saying that, one clone appeared.Both took out 1 kunai and stud ready.

ME Gabriel watched as his opponent made a clone. He made a few hand signs and 3 water clones appeared he jumped in the air pulled out his sword and then made more hand signs water started to cover the field around 20 meters or so the water was a little cold enough to make you notice it. He then made even more hand signs and slammed into the water as he hit the water he disappeared into the water. 2 of his clones started to run forward at his opponent while the other one attacked his opponents clone


HISTORY:


THE ARCHIVES

ACADEMY:
Excelled at fire jutsu his teacher who he learned a lot from had a impact that he must all way protect his village which has followed he through his life. He was the top of his class excelling at all types for jutsus. As one of the best ever seen in his village he was in the running for Chuunin exams on his first day of graduation. Which his graduation was postponed for unknown reasons. He then soon learned how to wind style which was amazing for his age at only 8 he could use 2 elements
Genin:
He went on several missions. Nothing above a B rank. But he had some close en counters many time his Mentor had saved them teaching. He showed them many thing. He squad was made of all water users except for him who used wind. He was the best Genin to come in a long time his Mentor was very happy with him he had made great friends along the way one encounter with feudal lord who has extremely anger in which he was by himself and took on the lord who has not the best ninja but a good match for him. But he then studied the human body for years he learned much he studied some work form a hokage.Has a very extensive medical history hits parts of body to weaken actually has a minor healing jutsu. He was great in that art but he had to concentrate on his wind jutsus. He had several times in which he preformed them but the medical jutsu used up most of his chakra. He was great healer after battle for minor wounds but not a actually medic you would call. His village was attacked in which he was forced to defend. In the dieing words of his Mentor He said I want you to leave which he did. He made a promise to himself never to Retreat again which will cause problems in the future. He will need a head strong Jounin to help him with many thing he will always remember those day.
Konoha Genin:
He now moves to Hidden leaf in which his style is new in he hopes to be welcome. He was he made only 2 enemies A Uchia and a guy name Sukai. He had found a mentor by the name of Pendo Koori. He had tried to leave 2 times one time he was caught. The other time he stopped him self he had bought a apartment he had also went to Konoha academy for 3 weeks and passed he then began to train with his Sensi for CES But his whole view of things changed he became more different each day. He soon learned that he was an Uchia after he used his sharringun and he had started to figure it out and use it to form his new style of fighting.


Chuunin-Present Arcs


Gabriel passed his Chuunin exams he had one the whole tournament he was seen as a unpredictable guy due to his changing style with each fight which went along with his amazing flash and his hard hitting style. He seemed to all ways know what his opponent would due. Which gave him the name Shitte Imasu or All Knowing One. He had many mission because of his ability he had came to great use in many mission he finally after going thourgh mission after mission he was declared a Jounin. He went on a mission to figure out what he was when he vistied his old village and he found out he was half Uchia which then brings us to today.

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PostSubject: More Jutsus   Sheppard, Gabriel. [J, CHUCK!!] Icon_minitimeSat Aug 15, 2009 4:50 pm

JUTSU:

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Wind
Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Nagato will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.

Name: Renkuudan - Drilling Air Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Renkuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The user inhales a large amount of air into his chest and then slams his fist into his chest to expel it. When expelled it forms concussive spherical projectiles capable of inflicting large damage.

Name: Senpuu Hashira no Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: This encircles the opponent with a spiral of wind, then the wind starts to rotate and is focused in rotating more and more fast. Once the opponent is imprisoned inside the spiral, the user can add projectiles, which will also encircle the opponent, effectively cutting them. That can make this jutsu deadly.

Name: Kazekiri - Wind Cutter
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Kazekiri no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. To utilize this technique, the ANBU member will form the needed hand seal. A large slicing wind will then be created which can cut through his opponent. This can be used to immobilize large summons. This will be the initial attack in an elemental trio used by the ANBU.

Name: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa - Infinite Dust Great Breakthrough
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Mugen Sajin Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The user can inhale a large amount of air into the chest cavity. A ninja can then exhale the air in a large gust capable of turning back an incoming attack.

Name: Tatsu no Ooshigoto - Dragon's Big Job
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Tatsu no Ooshigoto is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. Temari will swing her fan into the air, causing the sky to grow dark and stormy. These clouds will create a cutting tornado that will drop down on top of her target. This requires a fan.

Fire
Name: Endan - Fireball
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.

Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.

Name: Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.

Name: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu - Mist Waltz Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.

Name: Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

Name: Haisekishou - Burning Ash Accumulation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, Asuma will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when Asuma clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.

Name: Dai Endan - Great Fireball
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.

Name: Hibashiri - Running Fire
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: Katon Ninpou • Hibashiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The user will spin and generate a rotating ring of fire to race towards their target and surround them. This fire can be made more powerful with the introduction of wind from a wind element attack.
Medical Jutsus
Name: Dokunuku no Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Medical
Description: This ornate jutsu uses chakra to literally pull foreign materials from someone's body, no doubt requiring precise control on the user's part to avoid causing further internal injuries to their patient.

Name: Shikon no Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Medical
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can temporarily reanimate a corpse, creating the illusion of a living person. This is achieved by causing the heart to beat once more, allowing the user to control the corpse. The reanimated corpse can serve as either a short-time ally or an effective decoy.
Name: Medical Ninjutsu: Strong Beam
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Medical
Description: After charging medical chakra into his/her hands, the user palm-thrusts the enemy and discharges the chakra, capable of incapacitating, blowing them away or causing internal damage.

Name: Mystical Palm Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Medical
Description: The Mystical Palm Technique is a multipurpose technique that can heal wounds and perform surgery. To heal with the ability, users collect chakra to their hand to speed up cell regeneration wherever it is applied. For the latter, the user focuses their chakra into a blade to make cuts where necessary, though because the blade is made of chakra the flesh is never cut. This aspect of the ability can be used in combat, though it requires great precision to be effective. When utilized in combat it allows the user to sever their opponent's muscle fibers or their chakra circulatory system at the point of contact.

Name: Healing Resuscitation Regeneration Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Medical
Description: This jutsu uses a part of the patient's body as a medium to heal their wounds. It requires an almost room-wide seal and a lot of time to complete. The medic-nin on hand actually have to trade places after tiring, indicating just how long it takes.

Name: Ranshinsho
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Medical
Description: By converting their chakra into electricity, a ninja is able to flip the opponent's nervous system signals to any part of the body. For example, if someone tried to move their right arm, a different part of the body would move in the way they wanted their right arm to move. However, the victim can partially overcome the technique if they manage to relearn the connection between their thoughts and their limbs.

Sharingan Information

1st Tomoe:
This is the first variation of a partially developed Sharingan eye. The clan members pupil will turn red and develop one of the wheel swirls. Appears in left eye first.


2nd Tomoe:
This is the second variation of a partially developed Sharingan eye. The clan members pupil will turn red and develop two of the wheel swirls. Appears in right eye first.


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PostSubject: Re: Sheppard, Gabriel. [J, CHUCK!!]   Sheppard, Gabriel. [J, CHUCK!!] Icon_minitimeSat Aug 15, 2009 6:40 pm

Ok, first off, you have one specialty. You can have two. As a Uchiha, I would recommend genjutsu, but you can have whichever you want. Although there is not a guideline of this, I think that i will try to do something.

Although, your history states medical learning. Maybe you should have medical jutsu, try and think of some. Another thing with the medical learning, cannon characters are not allowed. Remove your reference to Tsunade, maybe put in another random medical nin.

Another thing, I have not seen where on your history anything about your family, although you have stated they are all dead or missing. I understand the Uchiha part, but what happened to his family?

Some of your jutsu require fans, and I don't think that you have a fan in your arsenal. Either add it, or do something with the jutsu. I suppose editing that part out would be fine.
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approved, now let me try and move this...

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